Monday, July 6, 2009

The Cage Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can hear the sounds of this city
Cars driving past in a rush to get nowhere
Sometimes if you listen those sounds can be preety
A drunken couple argues as a crowd start to stare
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Sam Edison
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Jazza Bella 19 July 2009

Maybe this one is a little Dark. But the message that I'm preceiving is good. Now tell me if I'm wrong But it seems to me like your expressing the conection that the people have but there seems to be a gap between each individual. As if they are different when in reality everyone is the same. I feel that if we learn to Love one another and except each other we'll akk see the truth. Now this is what I get from this poem please tell emif i'm wrong.

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Patrick A. Martin 19 July 2009

What's happening here Sam getting negitive keep your gaurd up buddy.

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