This body like a rose
Been a cosset of spring
Then a beautiful thing,
But the winter left me rot,
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Seema, very well expressed poetic thoughts - with your last para creating the climax! I loved those hands raised in prayers! Cactus for me is a symbol of suffering in silence! Yet it is a symbol of survival, a symbol of resurrection! Seema, have you read my 'The Cactus Tree'? - Raj Nandy
the cascading effects of the tiresome life and the ultimate resurrection beautifully picturised with lots of images....wonderful
A good abstract poem written with adequate skill, though not understood by all.
beautiful Seema......very well done and hey iam so happy to see someone from Bangalore! !
very insightful write...amazing choice of words...well framed lines...good piece, i liked...ten for you, Seema
I'm happy to read your works.A poem should be written as this.......unlike the story telling with no poetry elements.Excellent!
Insightfull! truly poetic expression. Ammmmmazing! ......10
This is very much like my poem MY DARK NIGHTS. Well expressed feelings.