Thursday, October 2, 2008

# The Cactus (Resurrection!) Comments

Rating: 5.0

This body like a rose
Been a cosset of spring
Then a beautiful thing,
But the winter left me rot,
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Seema Aarella
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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

This is very much like my poem MY DARK NIGHTS. Well expressed feelings.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 October 2008

Beautiful composition. Last stanza is very nice. 10+

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Raj Nandy 02 October 2008

Seema, very well expressed poetic thoughts - with your last para creating the climax! I loved those hands raised in prayers! Cactus for me is a symbol of suffering in silence! Yet it is a symbol of survival, a symbol of resurrection! Seema, have you read my 'The Cactus Tree'? - Raj Nandy

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nice wellwritten good poem

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Rakhi Jayashankar 02 October 2008

beautiful metaphorical poem 10++++++

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rajagopal haran 02 October 2008

the cascading effects of the tiresome life and the ultimate resurrection beautifully picturised with lots of images....wonderful

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 October 2008

A good abstract poem written with adequate skill, though not understood by all.

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C T Heart 02 October 2008

great poetic composition...a 10.

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Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

beautiful Seema......very well done and hey iam so happy to see someone from Bangalore! !

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Kesav Easwaran 02 October 2008

very insightful write...amazing choice of words...well framed lines...good piece, i liked...ten for you, Seema

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 October 2008

I'm happy to read your works.A poem should be written as this.......unlike the story telling with no poetry elements.Excellent!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 October 2008

Insightfull! truly poetic expression. Ammmmmazing! ......10

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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