Friday, February 24, 2006

The Cactus On Your Father's Grave Comments

Rating: 5.0

The grave of your father grew a cactus, you took it as a sign,
which you didn't know the meaning of until your heart was mine.

The cactus came year after year; you dug it out each time.
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Christine K. Trease
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Charles Garcia 27 February 2006

Great words Christine, I shall bookmark as a favorite. I am a lover of cactus as I live in desert country. read your work, impressive. Charles Garcia

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Raynette Eitel 24 February 2006

I really love this one, Christine, for many reasons. The rhyme and craft of the poem are both sound and the metaphor of the cactus on the grave is delightful. I, however, have an added reason to love it. My father is buried in an Arizona gravesite way out in the desert...with only cactus to decorate his grave. Nice work. Raynette

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Christine K. Trease

Christine K. Trease

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