The Butterfly Is Dieing Comments

After the chase I lay myself at your feet Batting my wings against this small cage Refusing to admit my defeat I agree w/ TLL &... lol. That's my fav line. I'm likely to spend more time in the refusal stage than the lesson.

I agree with TLL a masterpiece indeed! ! !

I agree with TLL a masterpiece indeed! ! !

This poem is a master piece! The line that sent chills down my spine: After the question I posed-thinking the answer I knew You forced me to swallow my lesson The only love here was the love I had for you I can relate with the whole poem as well but that line, so easliy made my heart ache. It is a hard lesson to swallow, but everyone eventually does. Brillant! Keep it up!

Nicely depicts the bitter reality of..well things. i enjoyed the read. Love the title. Good job, yea?