Saturday, April 9, 2016

The Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

That
Erratic dancer on the wind, aloft
On chance-flapped wings;
Pauses now-and-then to sup from nectared cup,
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Terry Dawson
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Roseann Shawiak 11 May 2016

Touched me lightly like a butterfly as I read it, your words alighting for but a moment, giving me great pleasure. Thoroughly enjoyed this light-hearted poem, it's uplifting in spirit! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 11 April 2016

this one is beautiful...awesome. thanks

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Poppy Miller 09 April 2016

This shows the heart of a man. Beautiful

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Rajnish Manga 09 April 2016

This small poem dedicated to the charm of watching a butterfly carrying on with its activities quite oblivious of the world around. Just amazing. Thanks, Terry.

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Terry Dawson

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Harare, Zimbabwe.
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