Sunday, December 4, 2005

The Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.8

there was once a beautiful butterfly,
it would flutter its perfectly patterned,
wings high in the blue open sky.
every other butterfly would cry out,
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Bri Edwards 22 January 2019

well, i DO find some spelling errors, but i 'love' the poem with its story regarding 'beauty' and its possible negative impact on one considered beautiful. to MyPoemList and i'll use it in my upcoming February 2019 showcase of poems, to be found in my PH list of poems. Thanks. bri (

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John Tiong Chunghoo 03 September 2006

every child would love this.

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Lesa K 12 July 2006

This is a unique one. A returning to one's original self and finding happiness there. Great job! I am enjoying reading your works! : -)

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