Waiting for a Bus,
it didn't want to come?
'started to cuss! '
then stuck out my thumb.
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Dave, I think this is truly funny and well-written. If it's any consolation, round here, hiring a telephone cab wouldn't have been any more reliable! t x
Excellent, Dave, this deserves a 10. A story, with fun, and its left us with a bit of a cliffhanger.... Love, Fran the Fan xx
Dave...if you were a deva all the problems would have solved out beautifully! ! ! ...so mate your fated date at eight was not fated to be after all! ! ! ....love...nalini
Riding the busses... because you crashed your friend's car, right? ! (I read that earlier.) A fun write, Dave, very well done! Esther : ]