Monday, October 17, 2011

The Bus Stop Comments

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I stood on the bus stop waiting and waiting
Watching the shadows on the street lengthening.

The bus however did not come, even if I waited night on night
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Isabella Francis
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isabella Francis 03 January 2012

Yeah sonali I'm very much aware of it.. It was about to have a very sad ending...

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Sonali Sings 30 October 2011

Waiting pays, though not always...Nice poem.

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isabella Francis 22 October 2011

Thank you Saadat.... :)

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Saadat Tahir 21 October 2011

nice lines...tender feelings... keep writing :)

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isabella Francis 20 October 2011

Thanks Abhishek.. I should actually appreciate your patience for reading such a long poem...

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Abhishek Tiwari 19 October 2011

It was your patience that brought 'him' back..and Its your patience that will keep him with you...life long...

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