Tuesday, November 8, 2005

The Bus And Bukowski Comments

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with rain,
tapping on my head,
and wind,
whipping my face,
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 08 November 2005

eh, not a bad effort, Vincent. but ol' Bukowski is dead. Jake

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A. B. 08 November 2005

Nice poem vincent. But read this poem again and correct some minor spelling errors.

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