Wednesday, June 27, 2018

The Burnt Wings Of The Angels Comments

Rating: 5.0

When Angels burned their wings,
I showered love on it,
the half burnt wings were with me,
I was repairing it,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 June 2018

O POET really you are great in your writings- wow O love I am burning from my birth there is nothing to burn me I am of Your burned coal ............ great

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Rini shibu 27 June 2018

Wings affixed on right shoulder enabled you to fly alone...interesting poem

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Robert Murray Smith 27 June 2018

Great write Akhtar.++10 Into my favourites.

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Red Soul 27 June 2018

This is an absolutely beautiful poem Mr Jawad. I love how you unified the human with the divine. Thanks for sharing.

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This is Judith Blatherwick banned from this site along with her alter ego The Crow. I had her banned for criminal defamation against me. She has 100+ disguises on this site. She stiil terrorizes other by use of The Crow and The Truth. Very dangerous.

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Khalid Saifullah 27 June 2018

A nice love poem, liked and loved it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 June 2018

An amazing imaginative write. Angels are often depicted as benevolent celestial beings who act as intermediaries between God and man. They protect and guide human beings Well crafted write.10++++?

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 June 2018

Keep on flying JA SIR And let me follow also to reach the sky in your shadow

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