Friday, November 20, 2015

The Burnt Cake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pretty icing with
fresh flowers
Burnt cake on
the table
...
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Toshie Nohara
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 November 2015

Very smooth sailing. simple and beautiful.

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Rahman Henry 20 November 2015

My vote for your poem: 10+++++++++++++

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Rahman Henry 20 November 2015

Yes, next attempt could be better... try again and again.... we all are with this hope; excellent poem to read again and again.....

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