Tuesday, February 28, 2023

The Burning Sun - Tanka Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The sun spits out its
Hot rays on the murky clouds
And goes down below
Runs into the leafy trees
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 20 December 2023

Fantastic.....love to read it time and again....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 March 2023

The melting ice. Beautiful expression

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 March 2023

This tanka has brilliance Rose Marie Bravo! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2023

The sun bringing such beauty and life and meaning! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair 09 March 2023

The sun who helps every beings to enrich life makes the mountains shed tears. What a destiny!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 March 2023

The last line. Great imagination Rose Marie

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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

Tanks for the Tanka. Joyfully beautiful!

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Anjandev Roy 28 February 2023

Runs into the leafy trees...... beautiful....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
Rose Marie Juan-austin
Rose Marie Juan-austin
Laoag City, Philippines
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