The Burning Candle Comments

Heart touching and poignant. I like to quots some lines here... My heart is aching Tears are dripping I won't see you for long I am burning and melting inside Soon I will be Consumed by the flames And the wax will be scraped off. Beautiful metaphorical poem shared. Full vote.

Very well written with poetic emotion inscribed into each word, dark shadows are reflecting...covered breeze...burning and inside melting..outstanding last line...and the wax will be scraped off! ! Wonderful poetry! !

stay away from the flame the direct indirect combination and comparing with a candle is good imagination and word conneisuering is superb.

The aroma is flowing around In every breath you smell it The warmth of my flame am burning and melting inside very very romantic poem thank ou dear poetess.

Melting Inside! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is one of the most greatest emotion filled poems that I have ever read. A person hangs onto every word from the beginning to the end.