The Burning Candle Poem by Rini Shibu
The Burning Candle
The Candle you lit in the dark
Spreading the light all over
Your face is shining in the light
More brighter than ever before
The aroma is flowing around
In every breath you smell it
You cover me from the breeze
which is trying to blow me
The warmth of my flame
You will feel of your palms
Stay away from the flames
Or you will be hurt
The dark shadows are reflecting
As you come closer to me
My heart is aching
Tears are dripping
I won't see you for long
I am burning and melting inside
Soon I will be Consumed by the flames
And the wax will be scraped off.
Very well written with poetic emotion inscribed into each word, dark shadows are reflecting...covered breeze...burning and inside melting..outstanding last line...and the wax will be scraped off! ! Wonderful poetry! !
stay away from the flame the direct indirect combination and comparing with a candle is good imagination and word conneisuering is superb.
The aroma is flowing around In every breath you smell it The warmth of my flame am burning and melting inside very very romantic poem thank ou dear poetess.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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7/30/2025 8:57:25 PM # 1.0.0
Heart touching and poignant. I like to quots some lines here... My heart is aching Tears are dripping I won't see you for long I am burning and melting inside Soon I will be Consumed by the flames And the wax will be scraped off. Beautiful metaphorical poem shared. Full vote.
Thanks a lot for your comments Kumar