Tuesday, October 27, 2020

The Buried Bird Comments

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The bird that was buried
Under the apple tree
Will appear on every branch you see
In autumn when you look at the tree.
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Bri Edwards 29 October 2020

Is a bird speaking? The last line was a big surprise & is kind of spooky? ok, it is raising questions. bri :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 October 2020

Write comment. Such an impressive poem, Afrooz. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 29 October 2020

Thank you.

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