Sunday, June 21, 2009

The Burdend Black Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's twisted I know
But true
I can only feel love when i'm dreaming it through
While this rose that burdens me
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Amy Ormonde
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Mel Atie 24 June 2009

i LOVE THIS POEM....THERE IS SOMETHING ABOUT MY PAST...THANK YOU FOR A SUCH LOVELY POEM...

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Kyle Jones 23 June 2009

I love how it reads, it is definitely well written, I'd give it a 8 or 9

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Eyan Desir 22 June 2009

10s Good write I like the flow but small errors needs to be fixed

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interesting thought. you are a good poet.

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Keith Hendrickson 21 June 2009

very good work. i really liked the way you ended it. keep up the great work

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Alex Andreev 21 June 2009

I THINK IT'S GOOD JOB. try to be well all the time, keep it on, get new poems and please: LIS MES VERS S'IL VOUS PLAÎT

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Amy Ormonde

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