The Burden On My Heart Comments

Somehow, this poem reminds me a poem I wrote before 'Yesterday'. Anyway, life can be really exhausting sometimes. But it's all depend on ourselves to change it and maybe to make it a bit better. I like the expressions in it. The words just flowing out nicely.. Keep it up ya! ! ^-^

A pure poem, well composed! ! but i like it because..... it explains something lively, breathing, ... the LIFE, and it is not about the DEATH! good work Friend! 10..

Dear Poet, You are in love devastatingly and feel lone. You need an hand on your shoulder to console you, take it me to and feel reconciled ever? Never mind poet, you are in love to whom is required pats? Be careful of your age and growing love?

amazing piece really touching

Oh my! You reminded me of what I went through. A touching piece.

Mm, if only others did understand.: O