Sunday, May 27, 2012

The Burden Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

hands clasped
mouth mumbles.

all things
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Aleksandra Spaseska
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Aleksandra Spaseska 28 May 2012

Thank you Wahab. Checked and correct :)

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Wahab Abdul 27 May 2012

welcome to poemhunter, yr poem rocks, but '' lips scorched dry.'' is this a appropriate phrase? may be! otherwise good poem indeed, i like it

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