Friday, May 1, 2009

The Bullets Of Sorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lethal bullets of sorrow
Aim at our rosy morrows,
By the cruel devilish FATE,
Push the men through sadness gate.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Krishna Dheeraj 30 November 2020

Sorrow comes with violence but life provides compensations to balance it

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Gargi Saha 24 May 2009

A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

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Rani Turton 17 May 2009

Sorrow does come with a violence that is depicted in this poem, fortunately life provides some compensations too.

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Rani Turton 17 May 2009

Sorrow does come with a violence that is depicted in this poem, fortunately life provides some compensations too.

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Lost Skiing 10 May 2009

Great Poem! ! ! ! Thanks for inviting me to read it!

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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

dr very nice poem there did it twice..great imagination cheers

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Alison Cassidy 08 May 2009

We are only vulnerable to the bullets of sorrow because we have hearts that are open to love's seductive spell. When one's spiritual detachment is strong enough, the bullets of hate, fear and jealousy will bounce off and become incapable of destruction. A fascinating spiritual poem which delves deep into the human psyche. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Lynda Robson 06 May 2009

A very moving poem, if only we could have world peace, 10 Lynda xx

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 May 2009

This is every day happenning with a majority of people. A good theme.10

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Raj Nandy 05 May 2009

Your last two lines sum -up the poem very well! Thanks! -Raj Nandy

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 May 2009

Really an amazing compostion, love with 10++

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Malini Kadir 05 May 2009

wow this poetry is really good....it touches the problems all face... With nice rhyming end words...and a sound message in the end!

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Akram Saqib 04 May 2009

i quite agree with your conclusion'No one is immune to attacks, Save men trudging on divine tracks' what a great poem with clear message!

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 04 May 2009

While we live we suffer barbs and bullets - war too now rife has a ravishing appetite....very well written - Cindy

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Ben Gieske 04 May 2009

Strong and vivid images. A good commentary on the present situation.

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Mohammed Albalushi 04 May 2009

well write dear poet, thanks for sharing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 May 2009

Some sheds tear dry, some sheds wet, Blaming tight-lipped heavenly gate. Some hides their pain in joyous muse, Some reveals it in word obtuse. No one is immune to attacks, Save men trudging on divine tracks. A great poem, Dr. Hitesh Sheth. Bullets always bring sorrow to human life. Regards Naseer

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Emily Core 03 May 2009

dude thats was a good poem I GIVE IT A 10!

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Catrina Heart 03 May 2009

The lethal bullets of sorrow Aim at our rosy morrows, By the cruel devilish FATE, ----------- Great introduction written, meaningful poem about life's cruel fate....10+++++

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Myrtle Thomas 03 May 2009

Thank you for telling me about your poem Bullets Of Sorrow, i found it a very well written piece and yes this is life here on this earth.Heart aches and destruction make no difference in anyone, we all fall prey to the darts and bullets.A great write my friend.Thanks

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