Wednesday, March 26, 2008

The Building Comments

Rating: 5.0

They came from far afield to build it
It was a lifetimes tribute to their gods
It towered above their straw thatched village
And people died in piles to see it done
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Mick Law
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Ernestine Northover 03 April 2008

A poem with great imagery and history. How often have we stood and wondered at ancient relics and ruins about the life led then. This is very well thought out and produced. Nostalgia woven through it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Thurnscoe South Yorkshire, UK
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