The Buds In My Heart ~ ♥ Comments

DJ says this is a brilliant poem and deserves all accolade. 10/10

Outstanding couplets with each one better than the previous one. Thx

Very promising stanzas. Nice work wisely thought 10+

Very interesting poem. deals with multiple subects and Smiles.

A nice poem of similes with a concern for still unread poems of yours...lovely...they will be soon read and commented

We are free to relate our own experiences with your poem.

Every couplet is a gem. It speaks about the journey of this life.10/10

The buds in my heart have blossomed into flowers Like the vapours evaporated and turned into clouds

Wonderful poem Asimji you are awesome thinker 10+

The first 2 lines caught my attention so I clicked on more to read the entire poem and I am so glad I did. This poem exudes talent and I am definitely going to read more from you! Your images are unique, paint a picture, and I don't think I will forget that monkey or that crane anytime soon! 10

Words are simple but carry depth of meanings

Great couplets. Last one is ultimate twist with great photo.

From sunset to sunrise and from dream to reality we perceived many things and wonderful mind creates poetry beautifully. Many buds bloom into beautiful flowers. This poem is excellently penned with much beauty. An excellent poem is interestingly penned....10

I did not know that cranes are patient birds, how heartwarming is your fascinating poem beautifully built up and so humanly presented I admire this cutest cool and crystal clear composed creation, Asim Sir! A 10 Full score and much much more! Fantastically rendered.

I must thank SH for his nice interpretation. This makes poem more enjoyable than those who read it.

Wishes turned into realities signifies hardwork done with a purpose and goal in mind. Like every river ends its identity when flows into the sea. And the questions remained unanswered like monkey with coconut is unique.

The act of evaporation is another philosophical phenomenon which soeaks about the spirituality. The poets heart is delicate it writes what appeals to them. The use of stars and moon basically speaks about the galaxy of wonders and so are poems.

Again your use of metaphors are excellent. Crane is very unique bird when they fly together they make v shape and when they wait for fish they stand on one leg for hours. Their mating dance is another act to reckon. Philosophically speaking bud is a small heart grown to flower signifies large heart.

You are true master of comparison. Your metaphor, similes and imagery is par excellence. Though all couplets are fantastic. I enjoyed... But the doubts of my heart remained as questions Like a puzzled monkey with coconut.