Sunday, March 7, 2010

The Budding Comments

Rating: 5.0

The budding.
A rebirth of a season missed.
Spring arrives to lift spirits high.
Clear blue skies are witnessed...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Poetic Soul 07 March 2010

An enjoyable piece...rudimental indeed.

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Booklover Tv Lounger 07 March 2010

Very fresh poem. I enjoyed it very much. It revels in the pleasures of rudimental emotions. Keep up the good work. -SJD

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Your play with words teases the mind into submission's of reality. Exceptional poem, enjoyed reading very much.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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