Friday, May 10, 2019

The Buddha Smile Comments

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Come O sorrows, thou art a waking call,
As happiness heals me like sleeping pills,
Upon a hard day's work how respite feels—
Let doors to joy open where there was wall.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 19 May 2019

thoroughly pluck the right place of life and meaningful note of this poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 May 2019

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee. Sometimes your comments are more enigmatic than Mona Lisa's smile. But I will follow Buddha and take the middling message.

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A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight, A middle path welcoming sun and rain! A lovely poem on the middle path of Buddha

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 May 2019

Thank you so much for the feedback. Sometimes I wonder how most religions say more or less the same thing in different words. Bhagavad Gita tells us to equal in times good or bad, transcend life's opposing duals. This is nothing but Buddha's middle path. And still wars are fought for religions.

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Kostas Lagos 16 May 2019

Caught the essence of Buddha 's smile! Splendid!

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

Thanks for visiting the poem and 'splendid' comments.

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Indira Renganathan 16 May 2019

If there is no change with a challenge in life then there will be no thrill in life at all..this sonnet clearly and beautifully sings that...last two lines are superb 10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

Thank you dear poet, I fully agree with you as does my sonnet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 May 2019

Thank you dear poet readers, I will visit this space again to respond to your comments. I do not see any feedback right now.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 May 2019

Member: Ratnakar Mandlik Comment: " There'e unknown thrill in getting way lost And reaching still the right place if at cost." ! Beautiful conclusion. Thanks for sharing.10 points. - - Thank you Ratnakar

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 May 2019

Comment: A smile and a frown, are the same upside down, one wears joys crown, the other is an anchor for the drowned. A Deliciously insightful work, a smile can be many things, sometimes we do it because we are happy sometimes we force one on just for appearances. Yet the Buddha smile is the right of a middle path.10+ - - You are spot on Kevin, just what the poem tries to convey, thanks indeed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 May 2019

A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight...................While delving deep into the line, I recollect, 'Desire is the cause of all sorrows'....Therefore, the great lord Budhha always smiled.....A great work sir...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, enigmatic smiles say a lot.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 May 2019

" There'e unknown thrill in getting way lost And reaching still the right place if at cost." ! Beautiful conclusion. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kevin Patrick 10 May 2019

A smile and a frown, are the same upside down, one wears joys crown, the other is an anchor for the drowned. A Deliciously insightful work, a smile can be many things, sometimes we do it because we are happy sometimes we force one on just for appearances. Yet the Buddha smile is the right of a middle path.10+

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