Come O sorrows, thou art a waking call,
As happiness heals me like sleeping pills,
Upon a hard day's work how respite feels—
Let doors to joy open where there was wall.
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A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight, A middle path welcoming sun and rain! A lovely poem on the middle path of Buddha
Thank you so much for the feedback. Sometimes I wonder how most religions say more or less the same thing in different words. Bhagavad Gita tells us to equal in times good or bad, transcend life's opposing duals. This is nothing but Buddha's middle path. And still wars are fought for religions.
If there is no change with a challenge in life then there will be no thrill in life at all..this sonnet clearly and beautifully sings that...last two lines are superb 10+++++
Thank you dear poet readers, I will visit this space again to respond to your comments. I do not see any feedback right now.
Member: Ratnakar Mandlik Comment: " There'e unknown thrill in getting way lost And reaching still the right place if at cost." ! Beautiful conclusion. Thanks for sharing.10 points. - - Thank you Ratnakar
Comment: A smile and a frown, are the same upside down, one wears joys crown, the other is an anchor for the drowned. A Deliciously insightful work, a smile can be many things, sometimes we do it because we are happy sometimes we force one on just for appearances. Yet the Buddha smile is the right of a middle path.10+ - - You are spot on Kevin, just what the poem tries to convey, thanks indeed.
A Buddha smile with space for pain and plight...................While delving deep into the line, I recollect, 'Desire is the cause of all sorrows'....Therefore, the great lord Budhha always smiled.....A great work sir...10
" There'e unknown thrill in getting way lost And reaching still the right place if at cost." ! Beautiful conclusion. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
A smile and a frown, are the same upside down, one wears joys crown, the other is an anchor for the drowned. A Deliciously insightful work, a smile can be many things, sometimes we do it because we are happy sometimes we force one on just for appearances. Yet the Buddha smile is the right of a middle path.10+
thoroughly pluck the right place of life and meaningful note of this poem
Thank you Mahtab Bangalee. Sometimes your comments are more enigmatic than Mona Lisa's smile. But I will follow Buddha and take the middling message.