Monday, April 27, 2009

The Brown Bear Comments

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Into the brown bear was the bullet,
Passing through as if adequate.
It was a Kodiak bear, in Alaska,
Opening too much, clever as a comma,
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Naveed Akram
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Anita Trivedi 12 July 2010

What a deepth.......... Great job................

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Saadat Tahir 27 April 2009

deep stuff naveed...fantastic similitude...if i have it right with ur poems... iv done many i usually find myself out of depth...and hence no comment previously nice one these lines cheers

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Naveed Akram

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