Wednesday, October 7, 2009

The Brothel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lips smeared red, dark and swollen
Eyes shining black and bordered
Her hair held loosely by a pointed pin
A large red dot darkens her forehead
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Dann Thomas
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Chinedu Dike 02 October 2020

A sad truth written in persuasive expressions with conviction. We articulated and insightfully crafted.

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

very nice.......... gud piece of work...

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Kimberly Lindsey 07 October 2009

goodness.....I was a bit taken abck, I must say. I was startled. I liked it very much, BECAUSE it was very different. Not what I expected Excellent job! 10

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