Friday, December 29, 2006

The Brook And I Comments

Rating: 5.0

the smell of green and springy, grass,
the lazy humming of the bees,
the cloying scent of small wildflowers
blue, blue, skies and a scented breeze,
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Arti Chopra
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Brian Dorn 09 January 2007

Poetically in 'tune' and a wonderful 'harmony' of both art and nature. Great write, Arti! ! Brian

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 December 2006

Ahhhh.yes, young lady...This indeed, is fine verse....utopic imagery, tight, crisp construction....Solid crafting, Arti...HAPPY NEW YEAR! ~ F.J.R. ~

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