The Brokenness Comments

The broken shards of life! But we need to look beyond them and tread past them..

This is how life is. We tend to look beyond the brokenness. There is always a ray of hope. Top marks & to my favourite

Marvellous Poem Aarzoo. Happy New Year dear Poetess. Glad to see your poem today.

And that is what life is all about. Like jigsaw we try to collect pieces to solve the puzzle. Fantastic poem, shot and terse. Welcome back Aarzoo ji

We recollect the past though that is broken! ~

Beautiful poetry, and I too know that feeling well.

Very much optimism filled nice lines in this poem.your breaking can be easily repaired, but heartbreaking would not be cured.nNice your heart is perfect dear Arzooji.

A wonderful poem. I am so happy to read your new poem after such a long gap. Keep writing. Happy new year 2023

Very brilliant indeed love it Aarzoo

To my Favourites and Top Stars for your beautiful but very sad poem, at least we see here positiveness

Loveliest worded for the sad heart and the broken life.Very heart touching and full melancholy. Myriad stars worth, I will cacth them for you, dear poetess. There is some positiveness in this very sad poem. Brilliantly presented.