Monday, September 11, 2017

The Broken Wanderer Comments

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Broken is the heart
Pieces are shattered
And dispersed
Blood is shed
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Rini Shibu
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 October 2017

Broken is the heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Thank you so much Edward Rini..

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Practicing Poetess 11 September 2017

This one could make the reader cry, too! A very moving write, Rini. Hope the broken wanderer finds a safe haven of rest.

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

Thanks poetess, even my heart ached while writing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2017

Wonderful imaginary. Well depicted. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

Thanks Kumar for your read

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 11 September 2017

Beautiful poem you described it so well Rini Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

Thanks Mario for your encouraging words

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Lamar Cole 11 September 2017

Very real to life poem that touches the heart.

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Rini Shibu 11 September 2017

Thanks Lam.. Rini

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Sandra Feldman 11 September 2017

I know the feeling, You've described it so well, Only those that have know it Can feel the pain, 'Of wandering alone, All in vain'. Sincere and simple, Your words reach out Felt by the reader, Of that, no doubt. Excellent and quite moving.

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Rini Shibu 11 September 2017

Thanks for your comments Sandra..

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