Monday, September 25, 2006

The Broken Shoulder Comments

Rating: 2.8

Soporific, transient images float;
the shooting pain keeps me vivid
as Delauney, except my palette is
pain not paint. The limp head hangs
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Cornelia Ceilings
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Not a member No 4 07 February 2007

Three months on poem hunter and I've finally, finally finally phecking realised that this is where all the fruit cakes come to jam as in jam like Hendrix. In another Alphabet poem hunter would be an anagram of Monty Python. Excuse me while I finish my blended oatenfishloavesdefroamgerie. As I was saying: would you like me to put a flake in that? ?

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Impossible Princess 07 February 2007

Utterly bonkers but somehow rather addictive!

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Roger Mountshaft 25 September 2006

I was struck by the sensitivity of this subtle and moving piece. An initial sense of the contrived quickly gave way to an overwhelming feeling of empathy for the persona. Vivid and visceral, the imagery cannot fail to pierce the heart of even the most lifeless of deadbeats. A must for anyone who has experienced the peculiar pleasure of a broken limb!

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