Sunday, July 4, 2010

The Broken Rose Comments

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It was red, and it was bleeding.
The blood came from broken love.
The thorns were stuck into her heart.
And her heart was bleeding too.
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Bella Hoeiriis
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Kesav Easwaran 07 July 2010

Rose has always been a good poetic symbol for love and its aftermath...your poem carries good effect of using the rose symbol in driving down your message...good work...10

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