The Broken Promise Comments
Why did the Heart beat so fast? I do not know! And ah! It seemed as if the world got ripped apart from those crazy thumping beats, that she exhaled. From the Heavens quickly burst the raindrops like tears, poisonous salty tears! Only Life did not seem so surprised, or afraid, or even shaken. She continued her endless journey, explaining to her creatures, that it happens like so in the long course of existence...
But an injured Heart doesn't understand and doesn't heal so easily, though! The blood that runs in her veins is poisoned by disappointment. And disappointment kills!
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A free verse in paragraphs.Moving lines tearful scenes pull the readers till the end. Heavens showered salty tears! Original, beautiful images exhilarate the readers.When love ends in disappointment, the heart cries lines of music.Those who enjoy their maiden love affairs don't get sparked to write.Love hurts the heart of one but flutters the wings of another because there is a destiny even in the fall of a sparrow, Shakespeare said in Hamlet.This is the first poem of yours I read. Rated *****.
Nice prosaic poem, where the nature and the human soul are entwined.Moreover, the nature expresses very well the human pain and the whole poem is like a surrealistic painting.....
Oh, thats really so painful and so touching as well as so deep amazing write! Great job my friend ~Blessings~
This is certainly a poem of rich imagery and concepts considering an intensely personal and painful emotions.
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7/19/2025 9:39:31 PM # 1.0.0
sad and painful yet with a positive message...this prose is a genuine heart felt piece... cheers