Monday, January 31, 2011

The Broken Organ Comments

Rating: 4.5

The conception of my love is drastic
She broke my heart and started a static
She doesnt know what she has done
Shes a kid and thought, it was fun
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Raja Ali
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Patricia Grantham 21 October 2014

Love is a very strong emotion. It can sometimes turn our lives upside down. Nonetheless we still overcome it. Passionately written and to the point. Nice.

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Anne Catherine Mccord 09 September 2011

your second best id say........<3

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Raja Ali 15 July 2019

Please start reviewing again, i have started writing again,

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Dane Fagerson 09 September 2011

the organ is good again...........excellent composition! ! !

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Alex Melinov 09 September 2011

I feel you man......truely amazing...!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 31 January 2011

the organ is broken, but there is still time For that smile I'd do any crime Such a beautiful end with gigantic impact.

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