Wednesday, March 26, 2014

The Broken Ones Comments

Rating: 4.6

The broken ones cut their feet
As they walk upon the pieces
Of their broken dreams
Ghostly figures in the shadows
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Erika Wingo
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 April 2014

And, for give me for that misspell. Your poem 'The BROKEN Ones'...is great and well written. ~LSP~

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 April 2014

Self-assessment and honest acknowledgement once examined from 'within' IS 'freedom'. A 'freedom' only those who have awakened know, has broken away from limitation. 'The Borken Ones' is a wonderful submission. Thank you, Ms Erika, for sharing your talent, insight and blessing.

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Pregnant with pain and swimming in sadness yet rich in a realism that compels the broken to begin the process of mending and healing. Well done my friend!

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Erika Wingo

Erika Wingo

St. Paul, Minnesota
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