Monday, August 17, 2009

The Broken Ladder Comments

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I stepped on a broken ladder
the first step crumbled beneath me
I took another step, it kept on breaking
one step, two step, three...i could see
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Sneha Murali
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 17 August 2009

An optimistic view and self-reliance with confidence.

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Ted M 17 August 2009

Good positive attitude. Nicely written in good rhyme............10+++

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Catrina Heart 17 August 2009

You have put up a very nice take out in this wonderful poem...its like no pain no gain...a fine right philosophy in life never give up even though how much you have tried...Great positive outlook in life! ! ! 10+++++

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