Sunday, February 15, 2009

The Broken Heart Comments

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Anderlee Goforth
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Shekhar Joshi 19 June 2009

Good work.........time heals everything they say..........but not a wound from a broken heart...........nicely written......... u need to check the spellings again........and try to break it in stanzas.......which will give it a nice presentable look........... ;)

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Zachary Clark 26 February 2009

It's a pretty poem and hope any heart break be healed by god.

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Raiyuken Senshu 21 February 2009

needs editing, but its a good concept, has emotion, has potential to be a good poem.

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