The Broken Heart Comments

Good work.........time heals everything they say..........but not a wound from a broken heart...........nicely written......... u need to check the spellings again........and try to break it in stanzas.......which will give it a nice presentable look........... ;)

It's a pretty poem and hope any heart break be healed by god.

needs editing, but its a good concept, has emotion, has potential to be a good poem.