Friday, August 29, 2008

The Broken Heart Comments

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My soul yearns for something more,
Specifically what, I cannot tell.
It whispers something in my ear,
A silent prayer, a curse, a spell.
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Christian Eliab Ratnam
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Silence Dogood 29 August 2008

I like it the first verse i think is the best the line ' a silent prayer, a curse, a spell' I really liked well written and good job

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