Monday, December 31, 2007

The Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Between the trees, he stood, that lonely man.
Looking out with eyes that did not quite see.
In his sad mind there really was no plan,
He knew not what would be his destiny.
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Ernestine Northover
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David Harris 31 December 2007

Ernestine, a very poignant tale at this time of year. Sadness oozes through your beautifully written words. Heartbreaking and heartfelt. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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E, this is almost too painful to read. We can see that man. You depict him.... (how many of us?) perfectly. love, t x

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John Nightingale 31 December 2007

Powerful and sad. Very moving. Thanks

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