Sunday, September 6, 2020

The Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

I stood praying
For a long time
Not an icon was before
Only the image of you dear.
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Suresh Kumar EK
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Varsha M 06 September 2020

A beautiful beginning for a broken heart praying and rain drops pierce into my heart.... beautiful. And the closing no ritzy life...no riotous moment...do calm so cool..... magnificent close. Every one should attend. Beautiful. Thank-you sir.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 September 2020

Good poem. I got a bit confused though. First verse impression a serious heartbreak but the last gives the impression there is hugs and kisses. Aaah ok you are having fun with memory of the guy not the guy which is why its a heart. Ok understood. M i bad?

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Rajnish Manga 06 September 2020

The poet, through his fascinating images in the midst of raindrops, proves that the nature is a great healer to the grieving hearts including those of the lovers. Thanks.

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