Wednesday, January 7, 2009

The Broken Dream Comments

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is it a nightmare or is it real,
that i feel like balloons.
i can't stop, i can't controls,
but i can feel this daily hell.
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Monyrath Prak
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Randy Hogan 21 January 2009

look to the stars...they sparkle like diamonds in your eyes.they leave a trail of star dust to sprinkle your dreams.........so dream big...they are no limit......keep writing MY FRIEND........

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Marisol Smith 07 January 2009

wow, another great poem. I hope you keep on writing, your great! -Mare

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