The Broken Clock Of This Wonderland Comments

this is great how the words just work together

the title matches very well great effort is shown here great work, love this poem :)

Very introspective work filed with many angles and twists...a ten from me.....

you did a amazing job on this poem

awww i luv this one n its really gd.

hey, i really liked this, it reminded me of alice in wonderland, even though i never properly saw the film or read the book. Nice work! kate xx

I love this poem. You can really picture what you are saying.

This is an amazing poem. very discriptive. 'puppets an strings, and zombie like things caught in a spider's web' this was my favorite line in this poem. Good work on ur poem

This was very ineresting, different, but I found it to be very good.

this is an excelletn peom: ! ! ! ! ! 10

It was Awesome. Good job.

this kind of poetry just like this makes me speechless and man oh man I am favoring this poem big time 10/10

total drama is here, in the lines...arousing inner feelings. nicely penned piece..

wow that is so amazing that im speechless. great job!

imagery is wonderful, innovative mind of a clever poet.

this poem is soo..... sensational. i admire ur writing

The fourth stanza is my favorite.Also, great use of words and many creative ideas.

It makes me feel loved by someone out there i love the way you worded it

Very nice, i would try condensing it though. Thanks.

Thanks for inviting me. I'm so glad to have read this very beautifully written poem.