Thursday, April 23, 2009

The Broken And The Beautiful Comments

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I don't know you at all, do I?
Tiny claws of a million hurts
Tear into my bleeding soul.
Emotions spill out
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Sunny Grace
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Devin Tudor 07 May 2009

wow! this is amazing! ! Great choice on title as well it really brings the reader in, it flows very well together and is full of emotion and imagery great great job. =)

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 24 April 2009

the flow is spectacular and this poem is full of ur genuine thoughts and emotions..magnificent..truly magnificent well done

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