Saturday, August 15, 2015

The Bright Ocean Comments

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The mesmerizing waves circled me,
The salty sea spray tingled my nose,
As I spun around whirling rapidly,
With the bright ocean
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Sara Javed
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 15 August 2015

Truly, life like an ocean whirls and swirls us and those who see the bright float to the shore of life Loved reading the poem

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