~the Brief Moment(When She Was There) ! Comments

A nice and well articulated romantic poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'Love chooses us, it's not love we choose, And a fine choice love made when she was there' wisdom beyond your years! i enjoyed that........ AAAAAAAAmmmmmmAAAAzzzzzzzIIIIInnnnGGGGGG!

its attention-grabbing, congratulations! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You make a good point. love does choose us we don't get to choose. Lovely work.

interesting piece, keep it up!

a brief moment and piece...you hanged me through! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice.