Friday, November 5, 2010

The Bridge To Nowhere Comments

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We've been crossing a bridge
for way too long.
And every step we're taking
is just plain wrong.
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Edwina Reizer
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Cleveland Gibson 28 January 2014

I think you've written many super poems. This is one that caught my eye, which I enjoyed reading and wondered about me. Am I looking for a pot of gold? Could be. But I'm really looking for solutions or a way out. Saying that I'm always looking for solutions to problems, to help others. The gold doesn't come into it. Except a mention in your poem. I feel your poem is a wake-up call to all of us to get with it. Stay cool. Wise up. And a thousand other things. Best wishes Cleveland W. Gibson

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