The Bridge That Was Built For Me Comments

Beautifully expressed! ! ! !

amazing poem! a dream, a fairly tale or just missed feeling... very bright although so blue. anyways 10+ from me

Great work for a starter, you have a great poetic imagination, keep it up, you are in the right track my friend, you got my vote, Love and Peace, Romeo

Beautiful description. Soft and smooth. Nice images. good to read.

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

A very captivating poem romantic in an ethereal figurative language. Beautiful.

wow! a great bridge! a beautiful symbolic poem! well-described! 10 for your wondrous bridge

celestial write..woven with captivating words...10+

this is truly a beautiful poem.. it had me smiling throughout the whole thing.10+ =)

Honestly, this is so captivating. Imagery, and uses of language in a literary work that evokes the senses.

Awe wow I really enjoyed this write so much Jen. It brought tears to my eyes. What a beautiful write. Very well expressed. keep up the great work

let the bridge shine night and day may for you, forever it does stay free of dust, untouched by rust strong, to last long beyond life and lifetime.... holding its heart, hum of a timeless chime

Beautifully woven love piece. well done. 10

very, very, very, very romantic poem...10 from me. i loved it.

A bridge of silver spun silk glowing with celestial twilight As if the spiders had spun it at your request And the stars suspended it at your behest Kept aloft by the stars you captured to light my way.......... love yet reasons to reason by glow in heart nobody yet knows how and when it grows, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , wonderful exposition of love by genesis, yet it is still mystery how, when and where it takes its shape of thing to come, most passionately scintillating sizzling across nature, yet utterly persuasive, ingeniously curved by the craving over the rungs of color yet by luscious glow ever attracting,10+++, thanks for sharing

begin my journey across the sea and stars To find you waiting with open arms I am lost in a moonstruck wonder a silent reverie Pondering why such a magnificent person is deserved by me............wonderful poemfor wonderful lover andfiancee.. she got what she deserved from the lover and hetoo proved to be so accomodating. a perosncanfulfill the desire thenhe cando anything for... so lovely poemi likedthe poem......10 read mine mary to marry..... anywhere.... butterflies around

A wonderful romantic piece Jen, it lifts the spirits as you read through...It's a lovely poem....thanks for the share..10

A great poem, the bridge was almost real.

Ditto: i agree very uplifting

Hi there - lovely thoughts and ideas expressed in this and so romantic! Thanks a lot - very uplifting.