Saturday, September 23, 2017

The Bridge Comments

Rating: 4.5

There is a difference between the moon and the stars
But the sky is the same
The sun is not ignorant
I must confess it is a star
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PRIYANKA BHANDARKAR
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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem. Thanks. I give full mark 10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Priyanka. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

Difference between moon and star is witnessed but still there is connection between moon and sun and stars and with us in perception is wonderful bridge. They are in deep sleep. Even now man does not know nature. Amazing poem is shared here really.10

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