The Bridge Comments

if the hunter becomes the hunted, then i think it's time that we pray to god above for his protection and his love.

you have seen the meaning of life....you have felt the breathe of the air and you have reveals the essence of a poet....may your tribe increase and bless your future....thank you and God bless....my sincerest appreciation.... your poem makes the world happy...God speed

A lovely poem................

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at least in my life.... you have thought me....the bridge....that we used to pass-by is the place we have to take and live...till death..... it is the avenue to a place that we have to consider.... of what place we desire to live.... thank you... you have change my simple thought...to grow more......God bless

A lot of good ideas and a very important issue/subject to consider.

Great write! I had enjoy reading it.

It gives me thought bout how those animals lessen since human hunts them down.. I might not captured the essence of your poem, but it is beautiful. Nice writing..

It's been going on like through out history. Man's nature won't change till the end and Judgment Day of GOD.

This is all our doing, and we shall all have to pay the price, and we cannot bargain, for we have plundered. Well said.

Yes that is a good question CAN WE? this was a great poem you wrote this very well.. Thank you for sharing this... ~Krista~

a PLAESURE TO READ IT, THANKS....

AHMAD, THE PHILOSOPHER, THE ANTHROPOLOGIST, THE ASTUTE ANALYZER, TO NAME A FEW OF YOUR UNIQUE SKILLS, YOU EXAMINE WHAT IS AND ASK US: 'WHAT IF? ' YES, IT'S UP TO US, BUT OUR CONTINUING IGNORANCE WILL DETERMINE THE ENDING AND WHENCE IT COMES. WHETHER A WILD LION OR THE SO-CALLED TAME HUMAN, WE ARE MUCH ALIKE. EVEN THE LIONS ARE CAPABLE OF LOVE AND KINDNESS BUT FEW RECOGNIZE THAT. HUMANS ARE WILD CREATURES WHO MUST HAVE LAWS AND GOVERMENTS AND RELIGIONS TO CONTROL THEM, BUT HAS IT WORKED? LOTS TO WORK ON, TO ADMIT TO BEFORE A PERMANENT NEW PEACEFUL WORLD CAN BE OURS. FEAR MUST BE ABANDONED. IT IS OUR ADDICTION AND OUR DESTRUCTION. THANKS, AHMAD. I APOLOGIZE FOR MY RANTING. MY BEST, CAROL

An intense thought provoking write!

Thughtful eoquence indeed. It deserves 10+++

This is a fine poem. The reading is uneven but the substance is clear and meaningful. It is worth a 9. Really a fine expression of poetry. I like it a lot. GW62