Sunday, May 3, 2020

The Bride Of Brides Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature is cruel and too hostile,
And my lovely earth is too fragile,
So hot are the sun and its light,
Look, beauty is reflected moonlight.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 May 2020

I am arrested in first line oh nature is not cruel God made this nature, universe, solar system mercifully, beautifully... as suitable residual place we the ungrateful human makes this nature cruel, unkind... by our indiscreet brutality

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But I shall kill this virus, too, one day. Reflections of virus will change the earth, Shall increase the bride's beauty and worth! A poem full of hope, positivity, determination and courage........10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

A powerful optimistic poem, hopeful about surviving the virus monster. I was espmadmiring the reflected beauty moonlight line most but the entire poem is fab and apt for the current pandemic, kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, ' miraculous birds seen in sacred sanctuary'

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A wonderful and meaningful message at these times of uncertainty. A very inspiring write that fuels us to conquer this darkness. Yes, with our strong power of will, humanity is united to beat this pandemic and we will rise stronger and more united for a better tomorrow. A beautiful and great poem from a great Poet and man. Onto my Poem List.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 May 2020

I have fought in past the epidemics, I shall fight with the current pandemics, what a lovely message why are you so late JAWAD JI

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