Friday, August 28, 2009

The Brickred House Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heavy rains in the midnight and a drunkard stopped there for a while
Waited under the portico till the rain seized.
He was bit scared by seeing the luminous notice.
'Please do not disturb here as the Lion sleeps in the den
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Alison Cassidy 04 September 2009

Nimal this is delightful! ! ! Your humble worm is quite the comedian. Your poem is a joy! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 28 August 2009

A mysterious poem of the night. I can hear the sound of rain. And feel the sadness of the drunkard's pathos. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Joseph Poewhit 28 August 2009

Don't want to mess with no lions. MIDNIGHT SNACK - maybe.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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