Monday, April 4, 2005

The Breeze Comments

Rating: 4.3

The barely felt
but loving touch
of countless fingers.
A silent breeze
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Richard George 15 June 2005

I can't believe this only had an average of 2.8. I've given it a 10 - so it's now 3.2, still far short of what it should be...

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Allan James Saywell 05 April 2005

An excellent poem herbert, said with few words in a short time Warm regards allan

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Kelly Allen Vinal 05 April 2005

A poweful and beautiful piece.

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Sandra Osborne 04 April 2005

this reminds me of 'song of myself' by Whitman. Excellent forray into a new form.10+

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